Two plus two equals five, Winston tried to educate himself the way the Party wants but it's hard to teach an old dog new tricks. He convinced himself to believe the Party slogans but he could not love the Party, Winston's heart belonged to Julia and it was his last piece of hope.
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+ adequate attempt at an attention getter (yet watch grammar)
- too short for so much information and such a "large" idea.
- lacks support and conclusion
+ / 4
your attention getter is good but its akward with your next sentence.
also short but provides what you think. more could be elaborated
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