While walking in the corridors Winston crossed path with the girl from the ministry of truth. In attempt to avoid the girl Winston walked without looking at her, he tripped and fell and hit her already ready injured arm. Unsure whether to help her Winston's sympathy lead him to assist her. While thanking him, the girl dropped a note in Winston's pocket.
Winston knew the letter had a message of some importance on it so he was careful to read in fear of the thought police. When he finally opened the message it read "I Love You". This was all Winston could dream for however, it would be very difficult to speak to her without drawing attention to the thought police.
The idea of no privacy at all isn't imaginable. Despite all the consequences of being caught, Winston's demonstrates true love by taking huge risks for the simplest thing such as touching hands.
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2 comments:
+ strong introduction, good start to your post
+ Alot of information is included, with good support.
- More of a thesis should be included
- longer conclusion would help
- lacks thesis and connected intro to conclusion
+ good and clear writing
- lacks a focused purpose; more planning may help
+ / 4
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